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Character reference for orange.
Shes looking pretty tickled about something :giggle:

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:iconailwynraydom:
oh she looks so exreamly hawt on this pic ! :hug:
:iconprepare-your-bladder:
thanks ;)

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Avatar image by ~kuro-musouka

I met an :alien: last night, I gave him mah coffee, and in his gratitude.....he ate my spleen :blowkiss:

Changing our minds is a family tradition that we hold very dear...
:iconchar97:
Her boots are awesome
:iconprepare-your-bladder:
thanks ;)

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Avatar image by ~kuro-musouka

I met an :alien: last night, I gave him mah coffee, and in his gratitude.....he ate my spleen :blowkiss:

Changing our minds is a family tradition that we hold very dear...
:iconmech-maker:
You asked for a critique, so I guess I'll try to give one. xD

Her posing is very nice and balanced to me. It also helps convey her personality without any spoken words; same goes for her almost serene expression.

The coloring is nicely done. I really like the way you made the shading and highlets for the shiny, smooth texturing.

The one nitpick I would have to point out is that it would be nice if we were able to have her other arm visible in the piece. Also (this is jsut really nitpicky and can be disregarded) perhaps adding a line near and behind her legs to signify a floor. It would make her look more grounded.

Other than that, it seems pretty solid. Nicely done. :D

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"We should be taught not to wait for inspiration to start a thing. Action always generates inspiration. Inspiration seldom generates action."
:iconmech-maker:
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"We should be taught not to wait for inspiration to start a thing. Action always generates inspiration. Inspiration seldom generates action."
:iconrazzle-berry:
Whoa! You did an amazing job coloring this picture. What I really love the most though is her eyes. She has a very calm expression and I think it fits the picture well. :favlove:

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:onfire: :onfire: :onfire: :meow: :onfire: :onfire: :onfire:
One of these things is not like the others...

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THAT BE EPIC!
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"IT WAS ME! I WAS THE TURKEY ALL ALONG!"
-Gir
:iconrazzle-berry:
oops i meant :+favlove:

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:onfire: :onfire: :onfire: :meow: :onfire: :onfire: :onfire:
One of these things is not like the others...

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THAT BE EPIC!
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"IT WAS ME! I WAS THE TURKEY ALL ALONG!"
-Gir

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